Friday, July 20, 2007

Folds Comments

Rating: 5.0

will my words continue as a story?
will I remember your priceless smiles?
you gave them to me
I'll never forget
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Jade Leven
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... Lynch 20 July 2007

Beautiful. A very agreeable poem. Like the flow and the ending. The last line says a lot. Beauty is an opinion, and often opinions are manipulated by others. If anyone including yourself sees you as pretty you definitely are. Great poem -Kylie M. Lynch

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