Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Foggy Hearts Comments

Rating: 4.5

As the mist seems to distract our sight.The fog lies within our hearts.
While we wait for what is yet to come.Is everything so close already gone?

It might be a miracle, it might be coincidence
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Polly Klomp
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Danielle Guscott 01 July 2009

This is fantastic! I really like the last verse - it's simply sweet. Your poetry has a raw honesty to it. Really enjoying your work!

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