Foggy Flow Of Dawn Stream Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Foggy Flow Of Dawn Stream

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Tiny water droplets are suspended,
In atmosphere of this early dawn,
In Earth's surface this stream is seen,
This is flowing towards sea of heaven.

This is a state of confusion but clear,
There is cleverness and tenderness,
Fog has lightly veiled this stream,
Flow of stream is looking so foggy.

Meditative water is still and looks calm,
Nobody can differentiate still waves,
Perhaps stream has stabilized mind,
Dawn looks so dreamy but this reality.

Meditative stream is in traffic of flute,
Carefully stream is hearing wisdom,
Getting God's pure message very secretly,
Foggy stream is going to become golden.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,17 September 2017. All rights reserved.

Foggy Flow Of Dawn Stream
Sunday, September 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,dawn ,fog,nature,spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,17 September 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kalpana Barik 04 October 2020

Meditative water flows with tender rippling sound and tiny waves with droplets. You are perfect poet to capture the scene. This is nice poem!

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

God's pure message we feel and hear. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 May 2018

Nature! ! Natural! Cleverness and tenderness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Chris Embrick 30 September 2017

The fog looks mysterious, peaceful, and is the perfect place to meditate. When the mind is quiet enough the beautiful light of God breaks through and warms the soul.. Wonderful poem and beautiful picture.

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Rini Shibu 17 September 2017

Tiny water droplets Steamy and dreamy dawn.. Wow beautiful

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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