Fog In City Comments

December is the month of the fog bar; it's winter of nature, it seems everyone in fog jar; nice to read

......travellers of unclear paths.....meaningful

Fantastic verse, Nosheen. Few understand that we may be as trapped as that urban tree.

Wisely written. I admire your intellect style of writing.

The imagery through which you create this poem is so marvelous! .....'The vagueness of life So accentuated by fog Each morning reminds We are travellers of unclear paths'

Exquisitely pictured. Beautiful. Seeing beauty even in the fogged city with " asphalt paths And concrete facades." is truly becoming of only a poet like Nosheen. Top score and 9not Myfavourites

(C) then the air you breathe is certainly clean. This is excellently worded, this outburst of your poetic heart and I have enjoyed it enormously again. 5 Stars Top!

(B) and are often the remnants of exhaust fumes from the previous day. It takes time and patience before they are completely gone. Then use our Covid masks to be on the safe side,

(A) Beautiful impressive climate outbursts, dear Nosheen these misty experiences and unclear borders are always encountered in the capitals of large countries

A poem so well conceived and written that we can feel and participate the ver deep and true images and deep thoughts it portrays. Loved it! So easily, a favorite.

Your beautiful verses so well create the nebulose and cold ambience of city life,

Each shapeless tree narrates a story of urban love.....winsome expression. Appreciated this excellent poem. Top score.

You are so right Nosheen, everywhere around this planet will live on throughout the ages.