Fog Comments
Blocking my view
can't see clearly
hard to see beyond
afraid of crashing
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Going blindfold is a part of being in love. Thank you for your poem
The heavier the fog - the slower you go. You put lots of intensity in those four lines. A 10.
You felt the lines precisely. The poem speaks not only about weather conditions but also conditions in a relationship. Thank you for commenting and for such high rating!
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8/1/2025 11:25:30 PM # 1.0.0
Such a lovely write👍👍👍