Friday, January 29, 2016

Fog Comments

Rating: 5.0

it comes to soften the glare
as it drifts in from the bay

it unites the sky and sea
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M Asim Nehal 28 February 2016

Last two lines took it to a different level, SUPERB POEM.....Beyond ratings yet a maximum for this poem.

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Barry Middleton 28 February 2016

Thank you very much. You get it.

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