Wednesday, December 2, 2015

Fog Comments

Rating: 4.5

We try to everything explain,
Project thoughts,
Convert complicated to plain,
All in vain,
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Sandra Feldman
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Brian Mayo 06 December 2015

I could have sworn I voted you a 10. It says,1 vote- 8. I must've clicked wrong. I love this poem. and I was writing more here but it turned poetic and not half-bad so I decided to keep it and let you inspire my new poem with this truly excellent work. I will credit you if and when I finish it.

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