Monday, April 15, 2013
Fog Comments
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The fog shrouds everything with its hazy veil.
It broods low over the worried waves-
So low that sea and sky are the same.
The trees tremble in the tiny breath of breeze,
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Heyyou Boy
15 April 2013
Great write i can almost smell the salty breeze. Well done Rose! ! !
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7/21/2025 9:54:08 AM # 1.0.0
The depth of awareness in this poem indicates your actual presence in this experience. I love how the lack of rhyme lends a certain brooding heaviness to the lines, indicative of the surrounding fog and constant waves. I hope to see more work like this. Keep honest and write away!