Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
Monday, March 25, 2013

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. Fog

Over that mountain the sun is shining
Over that mountain it's day
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Adeline Foster
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Liza Sudina 16 March 2016

such a repentance is hidden in it: Over that mountain our children come seeking That which they've thrown away.

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Alexander Beebe 27 September 2013

Love this poem. It took me immediately to a mountain valley. Very well written

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Danny Draper 13 June 2013

A fine write to remind us of the fog of time that lingers and the sun of change that burns it off and reveals a new and ever changing day but inextricably linked to the good things of the past.

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Greg Davidson 24 April 2013

the words just just randomly come so often amaze me. such powerful images both on the surface and at that deep level

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Shahzia Batool 22 April 2013

((Just words that seem to run together)) ... of course words form a string of images and ideas when they come from a master hand, they don't stay as just words, but become a meaningful poem...! ! !

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 27 March 2013

very beautiful poem with lots of visuals...

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Dave Walker 25 March 2013

A wonderful poem with a beautiful flow to it.

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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