.fog Comments

such a repentance is hidden in it: Over that mountain our children come seeking That which they've thrown away.

Love this poem. It took me immediately to a mountain valley. Very well written

A fine write to remind us of the fog of time that lingers and the sun of change that burns it off and reveals a new and ever changing day but inextricably linked to the good things of the past.

the words just just randomly come so often amaze me. such powerful images both on the surface and at that deep level

((Just words that seem to run together)) ... of course words form a string of images and ideas when they come from a master hand, they don't stay as just words, but become a meaningful poem...! ! !

very beautiful poem with lots of visuals...

A wonderful poem with a beautiful flow to it.