Sunday, January 13, 2013

Fog Comments

Rating: 4.0

Fog
Fog is mysterious, wet and dark.
Fog blurs your view and makes you unsure of what's coming next.
Fog creates wishes of people from beyond coming back.
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Lucy Grainger
fog
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Howard Johnson 13 January 2013

Enjoyed the last two lines, would give it a 10, thank you for sharing,

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Sandy Player 13 January 2013

thats tragic. reading your poem though its seems like the fog could almost be your inner person, that hidden wealth of experience and emotion that can be so strange to us. and maybe that way he is telling you hes still there by being an essential part of your inner self. stirring poem -M

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