Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Fog Comments

Rating: 4.9

On a cold December dawn
Came the Fog, riding down
With long fleecy beard in white
And wavy hair so thin and light.
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Valsa George
fog
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2020

When Fog comes on a cold December dawn, great changes appear before us. Speedy vehicles blinks their eyes. Housetops stands in hazy mist, bulbs lay dormant under the crust. Air is filled with snowy frost. Sheep don't come out of their pens. An insightful inscription has been made by you dear madam, I like this poem very much. Really beautiful. Five stars.

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Anjandev Roy 12 November 2019

in sudden fright......wonderful expression.Thank u.anjandev Roy.

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The poem inspires to visualise the cold and foggy December dawns in Kochi. Thank you Valsa

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 April 2018

An attractive depiction has been made on winter fog. Beautiful poem.

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Hans Vr 30 July 2017

A truly pleasant read. Simply beautiful!

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 July 2016

The air was full of snowy frost! With the ways of nature. Nice work.

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Josey Alfred 21 February 2016

Dear madam, Fog a real beauty, I admit I missed this wonderful poem so long. It is a real Village beauty. Simple natural charm. I wish you a very long active life to enrich the poetic horizon.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 October 2014

Phenomenal write on one of Nature's beauties so beautifully scripted with wonderful and lively words....Valsa.... you deserve 10/10 for beautiful composition

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Amitava Sur 14 April 2014

A very beautiful description of the winter fog with so many minute details... enjoyed in reading

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Walterrean Salley 15 September 2012

Truly, there is something unique about the fog. Though common, it's really a fascinating phenomenon. Enjoyed this delightful read.

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Elena Sandu 11 July 2012

What a delight to read your poem! Beautiful sound, for my ears, music the end a witty touch to craft nice smiles, loved it, thank you for share.

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Ramesh Rai 07 July 2012

well versed, nice compose. i too have posted a poem on fog but this one is best.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 06 July 2012

Descriptive poem on fog and it is very nice read!

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