**fog** Comments

good write, short and brief. Yeah my interpretation of this piece is it is the nature of fog to crawl all over like a feline or cat so silent, so soft and wise predator.

Short but your words captures the poem well.. good job..

like a cat...tickles with many wonder... Superb poem of ecstasy....thank you for sharing...God bless....a 10 +++

This is beautiful lago. I love cats and my ragdoll cat was run over a few months ago. The metaphor is lovely too! 10 love Karin

Lovely little white cat set its paw over the harbour moving into the city a silent bless for lover`s joy..... it is nice to ponder ovr beautiful poem.. good imagination....10 read mine...cats all over...cuckoo

reverse racism...hahaha!

the 'cat's paw/ fog' metaphor is really appealing...good...10

A short and lovely write, beautiful metaphor!

Two sets of Fog on the one stage LL! I like them both, this one is cute and lucky cat to neither fall into the harbour nor get run down in the city. So many levels this poem grabs my imagination. Thanks for sharing Smiling at you Tai

Nice metaphor for fog makes it beautiful!

Beautiful write. Our minds are running parallel tonight. Immediate connection.

An imaginative piece Lago Lago...with a neat metaphor

what an imagination you have, lago lago...great, dear!

Marvelous..A nice metaphor... Excellent imagination... Have seen the fog many times...Never in this prespective. Superb! A sweet 10. Ranjit

its almost a haiku well done................Thanks!