Sunday, April 25, 2010

Foetus Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

The intercourse of our glances,
Has made my heart pregnant,
I feel the foetus of love wobbling in around the womb of my heart,
Love aches its a sweet pain.
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Priya Radhakannan
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 April 2010

Dear Priya, a very creative imagination indeed! why the final doubt? ? ? voted 9 points thank u for sharing

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mohsin amin khan 25 April 2010

the idea is really really great one if it can be understood in a real way you verses contain a lot in them really being a girl you have reflected your inner feelings so greatly i am glad to read this poem lovely one says cheers

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