Focussed Comments

Great poem with a straight poet's notes statement, and very right too, Lyn Paul, the right panacea offered as a culmination to the whole logic in the last line..what i like in this poem is the internal word-play, and recurrence of sounds, like W sound in 2 varieties for eyes to see & ears to hear: . Where wild things grow Where anything is possible. Now... Tomorrow./// a good poem indeed, For life, is to be alive.... giving along the way.! ! !

Lovely write, thats why the world is a brighter place with people like you shining a bright light for the bewildered to see in their darkness.

Lalalala...i fell so good to have a drizzle of hopes by your write..calm me a while in a hot ray that burn my heart at the moment, you calm me now with a rain of motivated mind_Soul

I so agree with your words and thoughts written in this excellent poem. I have written a few poems saying about the same thing, and voicing my opinion on this very subject. Hopefully, someone listens. Thanks~

Man is helplessly held up in this web of situations as never ever has he wished to have been to. Your poem analyses the things philosophically and educates the minds of the readers on an unusual track. It is one of your best poems..

'For life, is to be alive.... giving along the way'...... This sure forms the crux of the poem! ! A great message...lucid and straight ! ! Enjoyed it! !

Many people are self-centered, the me-first attitude. We should all strive to consider others first, and your poem gives out a great message and philosophy which everyone should read. Well done Lyn, a definite 10.

This is a very profound piece.

FOCUSSED is a spirited poem and the lines- For life is to be alive, ....giving along the way - is very captivating and shining! ! I really enjoyed the poem! !