Thursday, June 1, 2006

Focus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why does everything have to be
subscripted for you? Taken
to the nth power, multiplied,
then divided among your admirers—
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Sonny Rainshine
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R H 01 June 2006

Wonderful Sonny - great subject, superb imagery - beautifully composed - your best so far (that I've read!) A 10 from me! Kind regards, Justine.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 01 June 2006

very focussed poem. lovely, sonny rainshine.

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