Focus On Your Goal Comments

This one deserves a 10++++++. Great write! !

a good treat to young ones

REALLY ENCOURAGING, I WISH I COULD WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS WITH MUSICAL QUALITY

This poem of yours well depicts the qualities of love and manifold soothing of love.

Touched by beautiful advices from mother to child...n child here refer to me may refer to other readers also, in a word of strength this is what we need to hold to serve a word of encouragement...''''''''FOCUS''''''''..and also ''''''''GOAL''''''''...thanks for this advice it so gently spoken in soft poetic way :) :) -Unwritten Soul

it rings true and i like the music and light contained in this piece well done and thank you for reading my work

Lines of wisdom, well expressed.fantastic imagination

You have a new comment about your poem: FOCUS ON YOUR GOAL -------- Sailng the journey with passion, acquiring knowledge and with love keeping the goal in sight. It is not the destination that matters but the enjoyment of journey that makes it more meaningful. Nice description of theme

Sailng the journey with passion, acquiring knowledge and with love keeping the goal in sight. It is not the destination that matters but the enjoyment of journey that makes it more meaningful. Nice description of theme

Rhyme is perfect, you describe so well the 'colourful aims' that each of us we have and how we realize all our dreams 'by listening to great voices'. The resolution of poem is revelating 'your goal should always be focus on its accomplisment'. A real lesson of enlightment. Well done..Cristina Teodor

Rhyme mingled with verse....Thats what I will call poetry with a purpose...full marks

Fascinating, a beautifully expressed tribute to the process of composition, or perhaps rather the success in composing. Lovely reflection of the opportunity, as well as sweetly hinting not so subtly at the generous goal of spreading cheer, the joy in composition on the part of the poetess, discovering what issues forth. Very beautiful and delightfully depicted.

Very beautiful lines having great wisdom and depth. The poem is extremely didactic teaching moral at different levels. A contemplative and poignant write. Thanks for sharing...

a life without a goal is wasted on endless pursuit... We should focus on our goals and make each day count..Beautiful poem..Thanks for sharing

Our GOALS - REKHA - Should always be focussed on knowledge and enlightenment. We should always seek for TRUTH because TRUTH will make us free. Thanks for sharing - Your Friend - JOHN : o)

Very nice message shared rekha! As always, I'm fascinated. Keep it up and thanks again for sharing!

Fascinating, a beautifully expressed tribute to the process of composition, or perhaps rather the success in composing. Lovely reflection of the opportunity, as well as sweetly hinting not so subtly at the generous goal of spreading cheer, the joy in composition on the part of the poetess, discovering what issues forth. Very beautiful and delightfully depicted.

This has been very well thought out , Good poem Rekha enjoyed it.

A very nice message Rekha! I liked it a lot. I gave it a 10'.