Wednesday, November 1, 2006

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Rating: 3.7

Like pulling on a stalk of wheat till
Roots and soil come up together on a hot day.
Your head is hot, the air is hot. Everything
Alive or not is hot
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Ross Lakes
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Not a member No 4 09 January 2007

Richly evocative and gripping writing. I forgot to keep reading and started to stare at what you'd created. And you've done that to me before with the Iroquois Brave - stuck in my mind still after more than a thousand other poems. Either you're a very good poet or I have an over active imagination. I think it's the former - these days. At worst it's both. You do 3D writing very effectively Ross. I can see why you're at the top in the communications business. jim

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