Focus Comments

Richly evocative and gripping writing. I forgot to keep reading and started to stare at what you'd created. And you've done that to me before with the Iroquois Brave - stuck in my mind still after more than a thousand other poems. Either you're a very good poet or I have an over active imagination. I think it's the former - these days. At worst it's both. You do 3D writing very effectively Ross. I can see why you're at the top in the communications business. jim