Sunday, August 5, 2012

Flying To The Success Comments

Rating: 2.5

To fly to the success
How many wings should we have?
The wind, a great fortune.
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Tiger Lily Love 07 October 2012

I really enjoyed this poem! The ending lines were fantastics! Keep it up!

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 02 October 2012

With a nice twist at the end which makes ther reader not quite prepared but you succeed in putting up your thought. Keep on writing! .

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Eindaray Kyaw 08 August 2012

Your message, Getting ready for everything is Flying to the real success, is really trustworthy. Keep on trying!

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