Saturday, July 1, 2017

Flying Through The Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flying higher and higher to the sky
The sky where birds never flew
Gliding on the wings like a fairy
Soar above the mountains and the ocean
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 January 2018

And in soft background music Am in thoughts of my hometown and parents. It always happens. the farther you go away from home, the more you think of it. Nice little poem that has a soothing nostalgia!

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Rini Shibu 23 January 2018

Thanks a lot Geeta for posting your remarks! !

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 August 2017

The red and orange rays scattered The clouds are like cotton candy Draping the bright blue sky You are capable of rendering a feeling someone has not yet felt ever! Nice poem dear poetess. Keep flying and keep rendering poems of eternal pleasure. 10 for it. Subhas

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Rini Shibu 23 August 2017

Thanks subhas for your encouraging words

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 July 2017

Flying higher and higher to the sky The sky where birds never flew... You are flying where birds cannot fly. in the beautiful, serence, peaceful and loving atmosphere thinking of the hometown.... and parents in a nostalgic mood. a sense of loss, joy and innocence that you enjoyed in the childhood, the nearness, love and concern of all whom you love.... very nice poem. thank you. tony

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Rini Shibu 10 July 2017

Thank you so much Tony

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Unwritten Soul 08 July 2017

This is very sweet, to fly with pure thought is the lightest and the enjoyable flight to ever have... Dream means to be true and sweet, this must be a dream then, but keep dreaming till it be true :)

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Rini Shibu 08 July 2017

Thanks Soul..

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 July 2017

A beautiful imagery. Thank you

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Rini Shibu 02 July 2017

Thank you Jazib Rini

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Lamar Cole 02 July 2017

This is an absolutely wonderful poem with beautiful imagery as seen from an airplane. Riding in an airplane makes us one with the sky.

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Rini Shibu 02 July 2017

Thanks a lot Lam Rini

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 July 2017

HI Rini, Soaring in the sky, people usually look still upwards. Want to soar still higher. To bring more worlds under their feet. Looking down from that height (Figuratively) is a great feat. Rooting the feet still on firm earth is! On the other hand, the beauty of nature seen from the skies, is definitely a fantastic experience. Many travels; many places; many worlds; but the greatest experience is seeing the Kerala shores from the skies. Sure it is. Beautiful poem. a perfect ten...

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Rini Shibu 02 July 2017

Thank you so much Mr.Unni

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