Saturday, January 26, 2008

Flying High Comments

Rating: 5.0

The robin sat upon the gate
with sideways head much int'rested
as in the fallow fields below
the cows are grazing unmoving slow.
...
Read full text

David Taylor
COMMENTS
Ernestine Northover 27 January 2008

What a wonderful poem David, a treat if ever there was one. Beautiful scenery pictured in this story. A slightly dreamy feel, as if one was entranced by nature. Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

0 0 Reply
Mary Gordley 26 January 2008

Wow David this is another fine poem to read more than once. Two lines in particular just ring beautifully to my mind: 'Nature does not try, nature does not try with ease it follows its own unfolding' What truth there is in that and something of a lesson for one as impatient as I.

0 0 Reply
David Taylor

David Taylor

LONDON, UK
Close
Error Success