Thursday, February 20, 2020

Flying Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

This morning i gave my heart to the sky.
It flew, it floated enormously high
To the clouds and way above.
When it came back to me,
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Aufie Zophy
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Irfanulla Shariff 26 April 2020

Each and every line has a unique flow and rhythm. Outstanding write! Thank you for sharing, Aufie. Big 10

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 04 March 2020

Wow a superb charming poem imaginatively expressed, I'm what they call a tree hugger yeahh and bird lover too so it seemed you were talking of birds and a tree then to a love. Kudos. Plz Pleez do comment my newest poem too titled, ' pink mania inking'

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 February 2020

A well written lovely poem...........10++++

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