Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
Monday, September 15, 2014

Flying Dream Comments

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Oh come on and watch in sky is flying dream,
Entire Ocean with salty water is filled in cream.
Everywhere flowing the stream of milk in nature,
Time has come to wait for a while us to nurture.
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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul
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Robert Murray Smith 09 June 2018

The dream state is not fully understood. It is mysterious as we live in a different reality.++10

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 August 2016

Dream! ! In the path afar. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 October 2014

Sleeps and dreams are still a mystery, man could not understand man yet.

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Heather Wilkins 05 October 2014

time does not wait for anybody a good write

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Alesia Leach 05 October 2014

A thought provoking poem and excellent rhyming.

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Valsa George 23 September 2014

Enjoyed this highly rhyming poem! We donot know what awaits us in future.... Man has limits! But God is omniscient, omnipotent and omnipresent! Relying on His power is the only thing we can do to keep ourselves in peace!

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Bernard Snyder 20 September 2014

How far life goes nobody knows.....that is so very true. Where do we go when we're asleep. As I recall, I've found myself in many odd places during these times. I find this poem nice and interesting!

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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