Monday, July 30, 2018

Flying Dolphins Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pier was crowded with people…the water shimmered like glass
When a family of dolphins caught everyone's eyes as they came swimming by en masse.

We watched one dolphin jump…I've never seen one jump so high…
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Jim Yerman
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2018

It is a beautiful poem on dreams and encouragement nicely executed. I quote..... That some day people will see you jump…they will see you touch the sky… and another boy will yell out, Mommy, did you see that little boy fly? .....so touching with nice theme. Thanks for sharing.. 10

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