Wednesday, February 25, 2015

Flying Carpet Of Solomon Comments

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King Solomon was said to fly
On a carpet around the world.
Sixty miles long and wide, sent high
Upon the winds, It's silks unfurled.
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Ima Ryma
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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 August 2021

A fascinating fantastic poem, but please never use a name from the Holy Bible to create a poem with a hilarious tone, but with a holy tone, of course you may!

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Sandra Feldman 25 February 2015

Very cute and clever. Very nice and agreeable work. Smiles! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 February 2015

Wow for me this is a novel masterpiece of poetic delight since we too believe king Solomon the prophet could fly with the winds and had winds in his control. U wrote it in a brill entertaining way bringing that real story to life. I hope u read mine too. Name sounds familiar.

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