Friday, June 30, 2017

Flying And Falling Comments

Rating: 4.5

Most every day I try my wings,
it is my dream to fly,
although some days I surely fall,
it's hard to touch the sky.
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 18 July 2017

A great lesson in poetical terms, icons.The greatest duty to try again and again.This is what worths most in life.

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Nosheen Irfan 03 July 2017

Full of hope and positiveness. Flying n falling both are part of life. Today's fall will become tomorrow's flight. A great message. A10

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Barry Middleton 03 July 2017

This can be if we are able to overcome our own weaknesses. Thanks Nosheen for your comments which are always as positive as this poem.

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