Friday, February 27, 2015

Flying Comments

Rating: 4.5

I dreamt I left this body,
Transcending mortal sin;
And to remember, hardly,
I on Earth to ever been.
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Unnikrishnan E S 28 February 2022

"I saw my spirit fly/ to eternity" … great poetry. Enjoyed reading

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2021

A wonderful poem! Loved reading it.

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Soran M. H 26 February 2020

The world of metaphysics is much wider than the physic world, , the souls and the poems are bursting from that source too, I congratulate you for your unique skill and your fantastic poetry themes and imaginary techniques..wish you every success

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Soran M. H 26 February 2020

Oh Dear great poet, where all these hide gems were? your amazing poignant style and poetic way of writing poetry is belonging to the golden generation of the famous poets, Keep writing and stay blessed, Excellent always it deserves 10/10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2019

I soared on wings above the sky, Passed oceans, earth and sea......I can feel the powerful imagination! A beautiful poem that is worthy of reading again and again!

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Prabir Gayen 16 January 2019

Into eternity....very beautiful expression...

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Luz Hanaii 13 November 2018

This is so beautiful, I love when I dream of flying, so liberating.

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Kim Barney 03 November 2018

I like this, Mihaela. It's the sort of thing I imagine could really happen. Thanks for posting this.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 October 2018

I saw my spirit fly — Into Eternity. /// spirit wanna be a eternal being! /// great

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 June 2018

A short and succinct poem! I sincerely appreciate the undertone! My pleasure revisiting it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 April 2018

leaving this sinful body to transcend it........ you were always spiritual in your writings. here you are too..... become a saint...... may be it is ur call....... thank u dear poetess. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 January 2018

I am fascinated by the beauty of expression, I soared on wings above the sky/Passed oceans, earth and sea; And I saw my spirit fly — I hear the tone of Emily Dicknson here! Thanks for sharing! ! ...............! 0

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Jette Blackstone 18 December 2017

As Sandra wrote, this is quite ethereal. I love reading poems about flying. Whether birds, or wings, or Angels, or nothingness, the desire to fly to is an experience I think every human craves or every soul...

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Sandra Feldman 19 November 2017

An ethereal, out of body feeling that only poets and saints (if they exist) , can feel. Really captivating and entrancing poem. A true fascinating delight.......

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 November 2017

Dear Pirjol, you have seen in dream flying above the sky with your spirit. But time will come that we will(means our soul will) fly across ocean, earth and sea into Eternity. You have wonderfully captured the thoughts and have inscribed this poem hauntingly. Thanks.

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Dev Anand 19 March 2016

I soared on wings above the sky, Passed oceans, earth and sea; And I saw my spirit fly Into Eternity. ohhh you are a spiritual lover. thank you. dear Michaela poetess

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A great imagination on life and eternity.

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Dhiren Doley 02 October 2015

Life is for eternity. I am encouraged reading your poem. The mortal body demands so much, but your poem teaches me to long for the eternity. Thanks a lot.

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* Sunprincess * 19 September 2015

.....beautifully penned...love this ★

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 September 2015

Transcending mortal sin; And I saw my spirit fly Into Eternity.. it is a spiritual poem for me. i liked it very much. thank you God bless you

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