Saturday, September 14, 2013

Flying Comments

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Soaring through the air
Back and forth I swing
Reaching for the sun's glare,
Listening to the wind sing. 
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Mel. D.
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Aman Arora 14 September 2013

Nice use of imagery...and you end it on a high. Last two lines are nice. :)

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