Saturday, January 24, 2009

Fly With Me. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Enormous and glistening, coloured brightly
With gaudy dyes stand ready the balloons.

Basketed, bobbing and light wind just right,
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Fay Slimm
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Sameer Ahmed 31 January 2009

Beautiful imageries and metaphors........A wish from heart has been put very elegantly in words especially hi-lighting the colorfullness of love with balloons..........10/10 Best Regards Sameer

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Herbert Nehrlich1 28 January 2009

Your usual, excellent writing. I am not too sure about balloons though. Even in the cold winters of the Fatherland, I rarely wore them. Hxx

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i stuck some of this in my teeth, to chew on later...my god! !

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