Fly Unchained Comments
What you've done wrong wasn't a mistake but a decision
So fleeing to somewhere far might be a good idea, not a solution
You cannot run from something that's inside of you
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And I'll bring the donuts.: -) Mistakes are often than not, simply bad choices, if you learn and do not repeat, you should forgive yourself
Enjoyed this...erudite and a clever close...Any reason why you broke up your Couplet structure by constructing Line 3 in Tercet form? Nothing wrong with that...Author's Choice, always...Just curious, iz'all...Solid penning ~FjR-'16~
Sometimes wrong becomes also decision. Fly unchained and free from guilt. This will definitely give amazing effect in mind. Wisely penned....10
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7/27/2025 1:38:21 PM # 1.0.0
From the pen of a real friend- - -enjoyed reading your poem Jr.Cuyam.