Wednesday, September 6, 2006

Fly In The Frame Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m the fly in the frame
Trying to get out, this isn’t
My habitat or my domain
When, in view, in here
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Kelly Vinal
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Sylvia Spencer 18 September 2006

Kelly this is a poem that takes me to great depths, I love to delve into words and thought and you have done it for me with this poem. Great work Cheers Sylvie

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Geoff Warden 07 September 2006

Again Kelly.....I do enjoy your writes......Geoff

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Tailor Bell 06 September 2006

full of possibilites...great tempo and style. nice work. -Tailor

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Steve Hagget 06 September 2006

Great poem Kelly - full of meaning and the redemption line is magic, steve

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 06 September 2006

Excellent Kelly... just excellent... a 10!

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Kelly Vinal

Kelly Vinal

Homestead, Florida
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