Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Fly High Comments

Rating: 5.0

Opening the eyes of a bird
falling or is gliding? Opening my arms or is it wings?
spinning around like a ballet dancer and forcefully like a cyclone.
dark clouds ahead, darting though the clouds
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sarah frank
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Luwi Habte 29 October 2009

this is so nice piece short but cute love it luwi

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Obinna Eruchie 29 October 2009

The voice had a fascinating dream about flight that went like the wild wind.

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Opeyemi Borisade 29 October 2009

Sarah, isn't it so lovely or do I ask how it feels having such a creative mind. Tight imagery, didn't even have an inkling it was a dream till I read it all. Keep doing this cause you are good at it...would be better. Thanks for inviting me in. Regards

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Marieta Maglas 28 October 2009

''closing my eyes once again, waking up from a wild dream that i might not never see again '' excellent poem....I love it.............10+++++

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