Sunday, April 22, 2012

Fly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fly, fly like a bird.
Fly away.
Fly away from me.
I cannot hold you in my arms.
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Saniya Galeyeva
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Mahtab Bangalee 31 May 2018

let everyone or everything live or stay at suitable place nice 10+++

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 June 2017

Fly my son........ just a fine poem my dear poetess.. if you hve wings u should fly. flying towards your own free world to achieve........ thank you dear poetess for sharing.. tony

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Chris Blazo 02 October 2012

It's always sad when you love someone so much it hurts and it goes unreciprocated. You must always let them go or it will hurt both of you in the long run. Great write!

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Alas! birds cannot see if tears roll down your cheeks when they are so determined to fly the direction they want where you do not se yourself.A thought provoking write...very allusive and rich and in brevity of words.Superb! Like a spaceships viking landmark.Kharasho!

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Saniya Galeyeva

Saniya Galeyeva

Russia, Orenburg region, Sorochinsk
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