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You have the talent! Keep it up! Such a wonderful poem! -pink butterfly-

You have a great ability to put your innermost thoughts down on paper and reflect on them. Something that's not always easy to do. While much of your poem shows a, somewhat, negative self appraisal, the work turns out on a very positive note: i will surely fight like a knight, escaping the darkness and come to light. i wont give up without a fight, until my days start turning bright. I love it. A 10. Richard

that was relly good

this is tremendusly good and u r very talented wow

Awesome! A great display of your poetic talent. You can juggle with words. Keep it up. CP

wow really beautiful ajith you too good +++10 anjali

yes dont give up---you are great---good attempt for a first time write keep sharing +++++++10 regards anjali (do read my new ones)

wow! impressive! the intensity is so strong that i could actually feel the emotions flowing through from a sad, depressed feelin to a furious voice then to a confident person...very well penned but i think poetry is all about the selection of words and although we have the freedom to choose any forms of words. short forms like 'u' and slangs like 'buggin' should be avoided at all times, unless, the poem is a non-formal one as in it is all about narration and if you intend to create a native poem. i hope you get what i mean but overall, i would give you a 9...well done!