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Once saw a bird in the cage
Singing like a sad opera singer on the stage
Larynx roaring while the Eyes closed
He might be thinking of flying, I supposed
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your attention is appreciated, thanks for your time spending on my writings.
An invaluable message in a great imagery. Very well expressed. " What the fly needs is desire" and what is needed in this life journey is hope. Thank you for sharing.
thank you Amir jan. I was late to reply, I was in a summer trip, you always encourage me by nice comments. Mercy.
One of the best poems I have read for awhile. Beautifully written.
My appreciations Jane, I am here to learn. but thanks for your encouraging words.
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7/29/2025 4:00:24 AM # 1.0.0
To fly - another beautiful poem that i read today written by you dear Hassan. To fly one has to have a dream, a desire, an intention, an incentive! " What the fly needs is desire Without desire the heaven is full of fire" ........Superb.....Top stars. Thank you so much for visiting my page to read a poem, dear Poet Hassan. God bless you.