Tuesday, February 4, 2020

Flutter In The Breeze Comments

Rating: 3.7

The light inside me started to glow
As the love upon me you bestowed
Freshness that lasts long
Fragrance that goes beyond
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Rini Shibu
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Suresh Kumar Ek 27 August 2020

the glowing of inner light is evident dear

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 17 March 2020

Beautiful imagery. " Where you flutter in the breeze And this feel I wish to never cease" , such a beautiful and poetic expression. Loved reading this.

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Captain Cur 14 February 2020

A lovely write! I can feel the love you have written fluttering in a breeze of words.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 February 2020

Anyone who is love flutters in its breeze birds flutter through their wings, a woman uses her silky hairs and man waiting for some more eclairs.

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Savita Tyagi 08 February 2020

Lovely poem so full of love and its expetations. Very poetic expressions.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 February 2020

the breeze of spring coming and coming awakening the heart of love thoroughly

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