Sunday, September 21, 2008

Flutter And Shake Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting hearing watching
The wind hit the leaves
Seeing them flutter
And shake in the breeze
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Kaspa Richards
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Tai Chi Italy 01 October 2008

Take off the me at the end and you have a perfect autumn poem. Love the title. Smiling at you, thinking what a coincidence, because I wrote about a tree in my yard today....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 September 2008

finely composed! no waste of words..........10

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Anna jonson 28 September 2008

waaaaaw as your other poems woooow good expressing

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