Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Flute Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you’re going to punch a hole in my heart
Then consider it as a work of art
And drill more six holes with measure.
For I am a fallen petal of Cupid’s wreath
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Sanjukta Nag
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Seema Jayaraman 09 September 2015

For I am a fallen petal... mesmerized and so visual Sanjukta...very beautifully scripted..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 September 2015

My heart will play for you like a flute Carrying sound from the secret root........Deep love reveals true friendship. So nicely speculated. All lines are in diction and intensive. Thanks for sharing.....10

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David Wood 08 September 2015

'I am a fallen petal of Cupid’s wreath' such beautiful words, I love this poem.

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M Asim Nehal 08 September 2015

Great metaphors with philosophical touch you made a musical heart for your beloved.................Awesome poem....A joy to read again and again..10++++

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