Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Flush Them All Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

(I went to the comfort room and then thought of something after some hours. You may laugh if you want as you read this poem but of course, please see and understand its message. Thanks!)

Sometimes, I feel there’s something wrong in me.
In these times, I relax myself and sit.
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Obed dela Cruz
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Chitra - 04 February 2010

Such a meaningful poem, laced with poetic humor and that is what makes it so interesting to read

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 04 February 2010

I will never be left alone with pain. I will never be alone in this place. In the times I feel that there’s something wrong I’ll go to be stronger and to stay strong. All those bad things, I’ve flushed them all away. So lovely and strong poem making me feel really could flush everything away...

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Lynn Glover 31 January 2010

I agree with Ronald, You have certainly improved in the area of language and I feel that as you continue to write you will master what you want to say. This is a very well structured poem and I hope to see many more come from your pen. Good write. Your Friend Lynn

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Briana Doni 31 January 2010

such a meaningful poem...telling me that i need not be distracted by the non-sense in the world. loved it 10++

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 31 January 2010

lovely to read! everyone needs to better himself everyday! ! ! ThanksForSharing/

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Ency Bearis 30 January 2010

A good humor thoughts......flush that waste....10

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Nathaniel Flying Owl 30 January 2010

A very serious message Laced with clever humor. I needed to hear that. Keep it up big guy.

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Nathaniel Flying Owl 30 January 2010

A very serious message laced with clever humor. I needed that. Keep it up, big guy.

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Joseph Poewhit 30 January 2010

At 15 harmones and growth take place. They are trying years, but in memory golden.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 January 2010

Every young teen aged person has undergone this kind of experience in his or her life. Me too when I was in teens.

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Areena Arora 30 January 2010

very nicely composed.....amazing to go through....keep up the good work... God bless! ! ! ! ! ! ! .........

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 January 2010

Sometime all we need and look for is a temporary relief.

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Obed dela Cruz

Obed dela Cruz

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