Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Fluid Movements Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was going downtown
to meet an exotic girl in the open café
where the children laugh and play
along the innocent hours of summer.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Norah Tunney 01 April 2016

Beautifully expressed I particulary like the 3rd and last verse Thank you Uriah Well done

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