Tuesday, February 1, 2022

Fluffy Light Snowflakes Whirl In The Air... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fluffy light snowflakes whirl in the air and quiver,
Descend to my feet in a white cloud, cover the Earth.
On the eyelashes they brightly shine with frosty silver,
On the lips are in a hurry to melt from the warm breath.
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Julie Anjani
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Dennis Ryan 02 May 2024

I really enjoyed reading this poem because your word choice, your diction well matches your feelings of wonder concerning the snowfall on your eyelids, lips, etc. Well done!

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Julie Anjani 30 May 2024

Thank you.

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