Monday, June 11, 2012

Fluffy Faces Comments

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Fluffy faces in a topaz blue,
Smiling and slowly fading away.
over the grasslands, on to the mountains.
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Juan Olivarez
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Constance K Yost 15 June 2012

Oh I love those fluffy faces-and all the rest of your powerful drama! Constance Yost

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Heather Wilson 15 June 2012

A great write, So well described, would hate to be out in that storm.

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Valerie Dohren 13 June 2012

Brilliant poem, very imaginative description of a storm and one can read some depth into this too.

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Smoky Hoss 11 June 2012

Outstanding Juan! Thunderstruck am I... Natures beauty, is power.

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