Saturday, October 24, 2009

Fluffy Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.8

In fluffy dreams,
I sail across the rhythmic motions
of the erotic sea
to where my lover lay.
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David Harris
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Patti Masterman 25 October 2009

There's some really thrilling words in here, even if the title is Fluffy Dreams- and David, don't worry- I would never set your fluffy poem on fire with my Harley-Davidson lighter..however, I admit your poem might have played a small part as ignition of my poem..(smile)

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Carol Gall 24 October 2009

fluffy is right a beautiful write words used are lovely 10

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Tsira Goge 24 October 2009

David, -Good the verse name, also sounds passionately..10... best wishes, Tsira

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