'Floyd Would Take A Journey Unsure' Comments

I gave you a nine because you covered a lot of things here. I figure that others might have made several poems out of this writing. You put it together and tried several means of communication. The important thing, was you never let the reader get away from you. You kept the reader on the journey with you. It was a smart writing. Worthy of a 9. GW62

Your words just flow in a beautiful motion. Love your work

I'm from the US, of course. Honestly, your poetry doesn't need to improve. It's wonderful, really. Except, on some parts I had to read a second time to understand, but it could just be me. c: -olivia