Monday, February 27, 2012

Flown Comments

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Your soul flickered into existence,
and fought to catch a flame.
White coats tried to bring you back,
as your mother called your name.
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Marlon Janaway
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Danny Draper 27 February 2012

This is a beautiful and sad dedication to a little soul taken so prematurely. Condolences for your loss, although no words could ever fill that eternal void in space and time or know the individual pain.

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Valerie Dohren 27 February 2012

A lovely poem - you may like to read mine on the same subject entitled Stillborn (not autobiographical) .

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Dave Walker 27 February 2012

A really great poem, like it, a great write. May i invit you to read my new poem called, Ghost.

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Marlon Janaway

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