Flowing Comments

The questioning tone of this poem makes for engaging reading. Very impressive and sincere.

I love this poem, and I can relate to everything in it. I would like to know how I can put my poetry on this site, if I can, so I can show everyone my stuff too. Its great that we have people today who will show us the truth (by their poetry) because most deny things like pain, and the poets who show it to us are truley great.

I like this a lot Melissa. Take no notice of the God-botherers. Haven't they realised that all art isn't necessarily subjective?

I have felt it at one point just as you describe it. That's why I can tell you that there is hope.... only in God. He cares.He is your friend. He can deliver you if you accept Him into your heart today.