Sunday, November 26, 2006

Flowing Away Comments

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Her mind trips,
as her knife slips;
the blade tips,
as her radial artery rips.
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Joshua Fegley
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Elizabeth Sheaffer 31 December 2006

The detail in this one is amazing... I could see it happening, which may or may not be a good thing in this case... Reading over your other work, many of them seem similar, so I'm guessing you base your poetry from real experiences... If so, then I sympathize with you... Watching that, and being able to do nothing, must have been extremely painful and traumatic...

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