Thursday, September 18, 2014

Flowery-Bowery Laugh And Dance Comments

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When the autumn say, goodbye,
Then peeping leaves say, hello hi,
Readying -beautifying out of jar,
Charming spring stood a little far,
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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 20 September 2014

Bold leaves are now turned to Gold. Rhyme and rhythm both are perfect and heart touchable. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 September 2014

Nice work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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