Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Flowers Upon Their Graves. Comments

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Hush! Do closer come, lets hear the last,
untangle the breaths that ride in past,
when beneath the grave lies and not hears,
shuts the curtains to our simple fears,
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Raja Nosherwan
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Unwritten Soul 21 June 2012

Nice and good feeling belting me as i read each line, it kinda reminds me of something, I like the sounds produced in each line too...sound nice and a good rhyme to me. A good poem always worth to read_Unwritten Soul

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Eric Cockrell 13 June 2012

love this one... those who have left their bodies behind still live... and most probably, grieve for us!

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Kaila George 12 June 2012

This is a beautiful poem it actually made me cry, and reminded me of my partens since passed, thanks for that its an excellent insite of how we morn the loss of loved ones

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