Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Flowers Of Love Comments

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What did I tell you about loving me -
I said it would just bring you pain;
But here you are, your heart in your hand,
Offering it to me once again
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Lora Colon
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bri edwards 27 January 2018

lay/lie.........again! right? am i correct or what? i'll bet ya an ice cream cone (ice cream is extra) . favorite lines: I may take it from you, placing it on my heart, Then I'll smile - and you'll understand.........................at least you'll consider the possibilities! ! ! ! don't forget to wear a surgical glove. bri ;) to MyPoemList

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Heather Wilkins 20 September 2013

beautiful writing. good imagery Many flowers bloom in love.

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 August 2013

wow! ! thats a great ink.the sort of poem i like to read and write.awesome! ! !

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 29 August 2013

I had to read the poem more than once, so gripping it is! Each line took my breath away.

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