Thursday, October 29, 2015

Flowers Of Eternity Comments

Rating: 5.0

You didn't find a secure corner in the sky
To plant the intimacy of previous night.
On the lap of rusty afternoon
Your sun yawns and spreads yellow,
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2015

From the sweetness of romantic branches eternity is wonderfully imagined with fragrance of writing....10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 30 October 2015

Verily, a message conveying one......10

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Loke Kok Yee 30 October 2015

and your love overflows in this lovely poem thanks-10

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Gajanan Mishra 30 October 2015

let us see with all sweetness to the dazzling star that is within all.. good one..

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Vishal Sharma 30 October 2015

on the lap of rusty afternoon-heart touching this poetry is unique cuz it is full of great lines that made me think for a while hats off

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